Respond to Papers

Mrs. Giles, you commented on my Science Paper. The first comment was about how you liked my title page, parenthetical citations, works cited page, and that the paper was well written. The second comment was about a phrase that did not flow well together. The third comment was if this one large paragraph was all from the same source. The paragraph was all from the same source. The fourth comment was about how I needed a stronger conclusion to end the paper. The fifth comment was about how I only used three sources. I reviewed my paper and found I did use all five of my sources.
You also commented on my MLK paper. The first comment was about how I did not have a title page or header. The second comment was about how I started eight sentences with "he".